1.) I changed a lot from my first draft to my final draft. I had quite a few grammatical errors and I also rewrote all of my part 2 because I didn't like how it flowed.
2.) I found sharing my essay with my mom most helpful because she was able to notice a lot of grammatical errors that peers reading my essay didn't catch. Also my mom gave me ideas on how to change my essay around to make it better.
3.) I know we couldn't do this for every essay but it would be fun if we had a day where we wrote maybe a short story and we could get your feedback on our work because you are a writer and obviously know a lot about making a story great.
4.) I defiantly have room to grow when it comes to grammar and spelling and those are for sure top goals for me this year.
